Hoping for Completion – Ten Minute Poem #1

I found myself struggling with thoughts of what I would post today and that’s when I decided to embark on my “ten minute poem project.” The idea is that I give myself only ten minutes to write a poem. Five-to-six minutes to write the content and four-to-five to review what I have, edit, and come up with a title. My hope is to kick perfectionism where it hurts. And hopefully an occasionally good poem may also come from it.

Hoping for Completion

This was meant to make me happy

To free me from my guilt

Instead the silence of the night

And the blinding lamplight

Remind me of everything I have missed

Everything I once wished to be

Like a child still believing in dreams

And the adult shouting

“This is the real life, honey.

Nothing, and I mean nothing

is free.”

And so I return to the work

Hoping for completion

In the dark

On my own

Awaiting Inspiration

Awaiting my minute

That moment when I will be free.

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2 Responses to Hoping for Completion – Ten Minute Poem #1

  1. Julie Garro says:

    I love the challenge to write in 10 minutes. I’m going to try that myself. Thanks for a good post.

    • kaycwrites says:

      Thanks, Julie. And I think that you’ll find the 10 minute challenge pretty entertaining. The trick is not erasing anything for those first minutes. It makes it that much more interesting to read and review.

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